
The sun has the might,
For he gives us power and light.
Father is the family lead,
For he gives an ear to our every need.
The tree shows us the heed,
For they provide shelter and food to feed.
Mother is the one who nurture,
For she makes her child bright for future.
Father gives us enough wealth,
So we can enjoy good health.
Mother shows us how to be kind,
When others hurt our delicate mind
There is a bond between the sun and father,
There is a bond between the trees and mother.
Mother and father are our dear,
They are the guide to fight our fear.
The love towards them cannot be expressed,
Nor can they be merely guessed. –
22 replies on “UNIVERSAL BOND”
Beautiful, Shreya. What a poignant piece. Yes! The mother and father together balance your little world. You express that so beautifully. Your words warm a parent’s heart.
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thank you so much ammai.
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Wonderful poetry. Keep it up shreya
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thank u mam
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Lovely poem Shrea….amazing choice of words….. Keep up the good work
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thank you ammai
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A warm piece of poetry which makes our heart smile
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🙂🙂thank u mam
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Authentic thoughts… well captured, Shreya. Just a correction: “Nor can’t they be merely guessed” – you have used double negative, which then becomes positive. Suggestion: “Nor can they be…”
Keep writing!
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Suma
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thank you aunty for correcting me.
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Very nyc😊😊
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thank u Misha☺
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Good one shreya, expecting more…
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😊😊😊thank u mam
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Sheriya,my sis.i appreciate your authentic way of writing….Keep going…All the best..Let your pen make a change in this
world 👍
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sure meera chechi.😊😊
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Well done Shreya
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thank you
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very nice! from rushiel. 😜😝
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very nice! from rushiel(tukku) 😜😝
done a very good job!must have sweat
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😀😀😀thanks tukku!!!!
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