I would like to be a boy,
‘Cause boys have all the fun and joy.
When girls like boys can jump and run,
Why do boys have all the fun?
You are a boy, do not cry,
You are a girl, you need to be shy.
This is what they say
The entire lengthy day.
Being the girl is the best,
‘Cause they are the one really blessed.
A girl shows everyone concern,
From which boys have a lot to learn.
The women shows power
When men take dower.
When boys are empty
Girls talk a plenty.
What is the trouble being a girl
They are as good as a Pearl.
It doesn’t matter a boy or girl
Everyone in God’s eye is equal.
All of them are from the womb of mother,
Then why should we differ one other?
All of them has the right
To be as strong and equally bright.
30 replies on “GIRL OR BOY?”
Well said shreya.
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thank u mam
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Dear,this is really right
What u wrote,everytimes in my mind,rises..
I like your good thougts
😢😊👍
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😊😊thanks Misha
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A very good view in the present social situation!! Be proud to be a girl…
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😊😊thank u mam
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I absolutely agree with this from my experience 😊
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thank u mam
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Wndrfl poem. Pls do not bother about gender. Be a wndrfl person.
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you r right mam…thnk u
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I loved this poem very much…It is a thoughtful poem…Keep going all the best dr
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This topic is the one which I am concerned alot these days…Change the world with a pen …👍
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sure meera chechi. thank you
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The women shows power
When men take dower.
I liked the simile power and dower .
Dowry is still asked by men.
A small correction “The woman”
Well done Shreya .
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The women shows power
When men take dower.
I liked the rhyme power and dower .
Dowry is still asked by men.
A small correction “The woman”
Well done Shreya .
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thank you
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Great going! For a fellow egalitarian like me of the same age as you, it is indeed enjoyable and interesting to read. Love your other posts as well. 👏😊
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Thank you Malavika for spending your thoughts on my writings. I love your way of writing too and enjoyed the way you speak.😊👍
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Happy to hear your words…❤d your post on hunger as well
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thank u malavika.
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Cheers t the girl power….
Proud of u…..
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thank u ammai
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Rather than airing opinions and views about the poem, I focus on her fixing right words at right place. I wonder how she could get so familiarised with the English language. This is indeed a point to ponder and all support to be given to Situ to hone her skill of the language.
Achuthankutty Swathy.
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your opinions are a guide to my writing. Thank you for your encouragement vellecha.😊
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Lovely girl. We are born to fly high and don’t even think in regards to gender……It all in the past. Be what you are.
Love,
Suja K S
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really chechi. thank you.
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Proud of u shreya kutty👌👌👌
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thank you mam
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Excellent work shreya
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thank you mam
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