This poem is trying to depict the contradictions felt by a person isolated from humanity or in simple words, fallen into the trap of depression. Each situation, sparks within him a tiny bit of hope which is almost immediately replaced by the sorrow that rests deep within him.
DESOLATION
What is that distant hum I hear?
Is it the long lost humanity that speaks?
Or is it my severed soul singing?
The tiny beam of light that I see,
Is it a ray of hope?
Or is it the power of the teeming darkness?
The drops that falls on my palm,
Is it the rain from the heavens?
Or is it my own toxic tears.
The words that my lips pronounce,
Is it a merry song I sing?
Or is it my hollow chatter?
The dreading weight on my chest,
Is it a swell of hope I feel?
Or is it the burden of my grief?
My limbs that are slack against my bones,
Is it from the efforts of chasing my dreams?
Or is the pain of running away from them?
The blood that gushes through my veins,
Is it from the courage that I used to feel?
Or is it the cowardice I had fallen into.
The final smile that parted my lips,
Was it the breath of my victory?
Or was it my own escaping life?
Being alone doesn’t make you lonely, but being lonely can make you alone.
This circumstance has brought with it even a greater threat than the virus itself. Loneliness. It is not an illness, it is a feeling than can be cured.
This pandemic period, keep your relationships taut, be there for each other even in the worst of times.
33 replies on “DESOLATION”
A very apt poem for the present Shreya !!! Proud of you ☺☺☺
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Thank you:)))
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Well written, Shreya! The contradictions are beautifully portrayed. excellent improvement from your previous pieces of writing.
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thank you so much. Do continue reading my articles 🙂
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Awesome dear… meaningful and hearttouching one….!!
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thank you so much:)
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One of the bests that I’ve read……amazing😍😍😍
I see a new star in the future…
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thank you so much for sharing your thoughts😊
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Well written Situ👌🏻👌🏻👏🏻
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Your thoughts on loneliness and depression mindset is good. Keep writing…….😊
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thank you so much….i will😊💜
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Realistically depicted.very good.
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thank you so much💜
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I love your ability to see an event from a multi-perspective view. A rare gift for your age…. God bless
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thank you so much for reading amd commenting😊😊😊
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Very relevant in today’s times. Lets remind ourselves and everyone around us that is positivity is much more infectious than any virus😊 Keep writing👍
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thank you so much for your valuable opinions😊
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Excellent Shreya! Keep up the spirit and continue writing.
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thank you mam😊
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Excellent Shreya….keep writing
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thank you😊
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Well written shreya.. apt fr this pandemic situation !
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thank you so much maam😊
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Good one Shreya…. Keep going ….. Eagerly waiting for your next creative work😊😊
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thank you very much. hope you enjoyed😊💜
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Well done Sreya…. 🌹🌹🌹… It is very apt for present situation… I am waiting for next one.. 😊😊
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thank you so much maam for reading and commenting💜😊
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Loved it ! …Really touching❤️ waiting for your next work💫
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Thank you so much dear😊💜
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Wonderful sheya
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thank you maam😊
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Beautifully conveyed & heart touching…..
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thank you dad💜😊😊
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